Re: [SI] Shoot-In - More come trickling in On Thu, 3 Aug 2006 20:47:20 -0700, "William Graham" <weg9@comcast.net>
wrote:
Thank you for your salvage effort.
Once it's cropped this far, the river theme is lost. If I'm going for a
shot of boats and boaters, I can (and have) done better.
And therein lies the problem with the original shot. To my eye when
shooting, the flawed attempt to trailer this boat created a quirky
juxtaposition of elements against the background of the river.
None of this shows up in the shot, nor in the other three I shot of
the same struggle. Instead, I ended up with a nothing composition plus
poor technical execution. Instead, I needed to pick up my camera and
find a different subject.
For the car shoot, I think I'll go back to the 35mm.
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